the Black Piranha

WALT: write a descriptive paragraph

It was a wonderful Saturday afternoon for fishing. The sun was up shining very bright. My father Jonathan loves fishing. He would go out for fishing nearly every day to catch fish for supper. On every Saturday (if it’s a nice weather), he would take his son out for fishing.

They were fishing along one of South Americas rivers. This was Jonathan's favourite river because he would mostly catch a black piranha. Jonathan wanted to catch a black piranha so he can show it to Luke. Luke has never seen a black piranha before so his father wanted to surprise him.

As they were fishing, Luke’s fishing rod was coming back up so his dad went over to help him pull it up. To their surprise it was a black piranha. Luke was so surprised. His dad was so happy that Luke caught a black piranha.

The Black Piranha is distinctive and has a very dark colour. Its teeth are very sharp and it's a fearsome hunter. The Black Piranha has a tatty body because other Piranha come and eat the tail and fins. This fish has a stocky body and burning red eyes. This fish moves incredibly fast. Watch out for the black piranha because it can bite you.   

When it was time to leave, Luke was smiling all the way to the car. He was so happy that he caught a black piranha. Fishing has become so fun that Luke wanted to go every weekend.