24th of September
Dear Ms Parkes
Thank you so much for helping us improve our writing this year. Your suggestions were very helpful.
The Diamante poem is one of the things that I enjoyed. I enjoyed doing this because it was something new and it was fun too. In my diamante poem, I described the Black Piranha and Electric Eel. It turned out amazing and real fun to read.
I found the 4x4 poem very helpful because it taught me about adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and nouns. It was awesome finding words that described me. I still need help with this poem because sometimes I find it difficult describing other things. Next term, I will practice writing a 4x4 poem to get it right.
Your suggestion you gave to my teacher to record our voice while reading out our story was good for checking if our story made sense. When I recorded mine, I found that some of my sentences didn't make sense so I had to go back and edit it. This was a really good suggestion.
In term 4, I will try my best to improve my writing and I will practice on what I need to learn on more. I really appreciate you helping us with our writing. Thank you very much Mrs Parkes.
Yours sincerely:
Camille
