Billy gets lost at the mall

WALT: write a narrative with focus on a powerful introduction.

A little boy name Billy is very naughty. He never listens to what his parents says and he always wants to go wherever he wants. This is what happens to Billy at a shopping mall for not listening.

Billys family was planning to go to the mall. When Billy heard about it he quickly changed his close and rushed to the car. They arrived at the shopping mall and Billy rushes out off the car and pushes his brother Max out off his way.

“OUCH”, Max shouted.

“HAHA”, laughed Billy.

“Stop it Billy”, Said Billys mom.

Billy wasn’t listening to his mom. He ran into the mall and quickly went down the escalator. His mom try to stop him but it was too late. They catch up to Billy and told him,

“Don't run off like that again you might get lost.” Billys mom says angrily.

Billy didn't even care about a word his mom said he  was too busy looking at the toys at the toy shop.

First they had to go buy Max new school uniform. When they bought Max’s uniform they went to get some ice - cream. When they were having ice - cream Billy sneaked away and went to the toy store.

When he got to the toy store he saw the toy he really wanted. When Billys mom turned around to tell Billy something she saw that Billy was gone. She panicked because the mall was thick with people and could they find Billy. They all splitted up to find Billy because they were really worried.

When Billy came back to where his mom was he panicked because his mom wasn't there. He started to look for his family. . When Billy went looking for his family he saw his brother entering the toy store he ran to his brother and hugged him.

They went to the car park and his family was there. Billy ran to his mom and hugged her tight and he said,

“I will never sneak out like that again”

Billy learned to listen to his parents and never be naughty again